Thursday 13 October 2016

This week we have been really focusing on our writing for the Astlle testing dad and this is what we have been practice writing about !


Global intro

All around the world there are many different kinds of communities.from small farming
,isolated tribal , city community, and communities within communities.


Intro to ur topic

All communities need the many things to make that community special.such as wifi recreational activities and food.

WIFI


Wifi allows devices to communicate and be able to reach websites on the internet.

Wifi will allow all devices to reach connection to the internet.And the internet can be safely reached around houses, supermarkets ,pool and shops.

Wifi is also important to the community as schools have wifi for the school's connection to school work .At home it is needed to entertain and keep in touch with friends and family.
It is also important as if u go out and u need to contact someone urgently or have to get in touch with someone if ur out and that

Recreation and pastimes

Recreational  activities are those things that people do for enjoyment.for example the scooter park, aquatic center,hunting , sport and may others…..


It's good to be able to do these things as to be fit and to get outside and not trapped inside.for u to be outside your brain gets the fresh air which is great but also gathering new ideas and it's also great that those kids at home don't be on there electronics all day which can ruin their eyesight so that's also another wonderful excuse for getting outside.friendships are a great way to get outside or just hang with ur family but hanging with ur friend like going to the movies is a good social entertainment life as well.

Food

All communities should have more than just a fish and chip shop there are many varieties of restaurants and cafes that u can enjoy and have a nice meal.

Cafes are very nice for catching up with friends and family or just a casual cake or pie  then off to work in the morning.they can also be pretty nice to go to after a hot sweaty run.restaurants are very nice to go for birthdays or a casual dinner with friends . there are many types of restaurants but not every little town has them all.Everyone loves takeaways if ur in a rush or just can't be bothered to make dinner that night after a long day of work well most of the time.But having all these varieties is very good for ur community .

Conclusion

With all of these things it make one little change to your community which be be helpful in ur lifetime of living in that small town of urs.

thx for reading and hope u enjoyed :)

2 comments:

  1. Hello Brodie. I enjoyed reading your writing. I think that it was written well and did you enjoy writing this? Have a fun weekend. From Mishka.

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  2. Hey Brodie. I really loved reading this, very cool! Next time re-read it and make sure it makes sense and use the full words. Besides that, Keep up the great work girl!! From Morgan<3

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